Comparison between Hamlet and Laertes

Paper instructions:
Compare:
Hamlet/Laertes

and then write an essay in which you compare and contrast them in terms of two points of

comparison.

What are “points of comparison”? They can be aspects of human nature, tendencies, values,

personality traits, fears, etc. For example, if “honesty” is worth noting in terms of both of your

characters, then make a case for that in your essay. Both characters may be remarkably

honest; or one character may be honest and the other dishonest; or they may both struggle

within themselves between honesty and dishonesty; or they may be honest about some things

but dishonest about others. You may write anything as long as the point of the comparison is

pertinent, worthwhile, and clearly-explained.

Some examples of points of comparison are intelligence, willpower, nurturing abilities,

cowardice, sense of humor, open-mindedness, empathy, greed, envy, laziness, impulsiveness,

etc. Your thesis will be a clearly-worded statement in which you identify which two

characters and which two traits you will be addressing, and then a more general thematic

conclusion based upon those facts (your “so what”). For example:

*Characters: St. John and Mr. Brocklehurst

*Points of comparison: tendency to impose religious views on others/willingness to give all for

own beliefs

Thesis: Although St. John Rivers and Mr. Brocklehurst are both

highly religious characters who impose their views on others,

St. John alone is willing to put his own life at risk for his

ideals. This difference shows that outwardly fervent religious

behavior does not always indicate a true commitment to faith.

Your thesis will likely end up being two sentences, and that’s okay.