Carefully consider the following process paragraph. It lacks a topic sentence, includes some irrelevant ideas, and does not maintain a logical order.
Write a suitable topic sentence and revise the paragraph so that it demonstrates unity, support, and
When my brother Ryan comes home after a vicious soccer game on a hot day, he is usually sweaty and smeared
with mud. I, too, am sometimes messy, but not as much as him. He zips into the shower and spends five minutes
scrubbing away the dirt and sweat. Wrapping a towel around his waist, he brushes his teeth, rolls on some
deodorant, and examines his damp hair. But before that, he dries his body with the towel. Within ten minutes,
Ryan has emerged from a cloud of dirt, sweat, and various odors and become a magnet for young women. A few
swipes of his hairbrush are all he needs to style his hair. I wish I had that kind of hair! After he completes
the hairstyling, he puts on any pair of jeans and semi-clean shirt he can find. Ryan looks great in any outfit
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