computer crimes

computer crimes
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This is certainly an ever increasingly urgent sub, and you present a lot of interesting information, but I do not see a focused argument here. But just responding to what I see here I would focus on two issues: I think it would help if you did more to explain and connect with your sources and you also want to make sure you are clearly arguing a datable point, and that there is an opposition view that is well represented. You want to avoid the trap of either just presenting information to the reader or of arguing a position against which there is no real argument.
These two areas are really connected, for engaging your sources is about more than just getting in lots of citations; it is about “coming to terms” with your key sources, introducing them to the reader, and showing how your references fit into the larger context of their overall argument. At root, you want to show the reader how your work grows out of (and responds to)
some scholarly conversation. It helps the reader to see how your ideas are built upon the work of some and are in opposition to others. This gives your own argument greater clarity, and once we see the full range of the debate (including the opposing view), your own work gains a lot of credibility. As of this draft, all your citations are quick, passing references, and you do not take the time to quote your sources let alone explain what they are about.

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