Recommendation Letter

Please read the attachment What I wrote is in black.

What are your recommendations for improvements? Recommendations for changes. Do not write in general terms. Be specific in the concerns you are addressing for the facility. Define and defend the recommendations you made for the facility.
*Financial Issues
Bright Road Health Care System is experiencing financial problems. There are insurers with late payments, Medicare fees due to patient readmission within 30 days, high staff turnover, and low admissions to its obstetrics service. The Chief Administrative Officer is very concerned because he knows this reflects on him and may affect his job. The student is a financial consultant and will work with Bright Road Health Care System staff members to review and analyze how operations in the Health Care System negatively affect its finances. Based on this information, the student will make recommendations for changes.

Letter must be more emotional !