English weak descriptive evidence

Please help me to read an essay and then write a 300-words response. In the response, please answer these questions:

1.What’s the author’s thesis (or point)? Transcribe it below.

2.Provide an example of strong descriptive evidence (showing).

3.Why did you like it?

4.Provide an example of weak descriptive evidence (showing). How should the author revise it?

5. What is the explanation? Comment on whether or not it draws a logical progression back to the point. That is, discuss whether it clearly demonstrates how the information/evidence supports the point.

6.What score would you give it out of 100? Justify that score with positive and negative aspects of the work.