obesity and physical activity
Paper instructions:
The intro could get to the ‘geography’ much more explicitly and quickly
(what is the main question you are asking?). And provide a brief account
of what is to follow (the sections of the paper, your main arguments and
conclusion)
-I see that the second section (2 models) addresses my first point –
just incorporate into the first section.
– the 2 models approach is good. But perhaps just call them
‘approaches’? (Quant and Qual)
-Your objective – move it forward, and make it more focused. Perhaps
there are more than 1: to review/compare quant and qual approaches, 2:
to make the case for more mixed methods??, 3: To provide insights from
research on evidence based policy strategies to address children’s obesity?
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